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Welcome to my learning portfolio. I go to Te Kura o Tiori - Burnham School. This portfolio shows some of the work I am most proud of. Please join my journey and give me some positive feedback.
Monday, 22 September 2014
Math... I have achieved my nine times tables but still need a but still need to learn some of my eight times tables.
Writing... My punctuation has improved lots and I think I have learned lots.

Writing... My punctuation has improved lots and I think I have learned lots.
Thursday, 21 August 2014
A duel between Harry Potter and Voldemort
Surrounded by smoke, ashes and fallen buildings I struggled to reach my wand, my face was covered in blood and dirt. As I stood up with my wand firmly in my hand Voldemort struck. Dusk had just ran over Hogwarts castle it was the perfect time for a duel. I fought back re dang green hit in the air, the force of my wand wasn't powerful enough to defeat Voldemort.
As the wind blew in my face I was hoping my friends would be ok battling a venomous snake, I saw them screaming in terror. Suddenly Neville came out of nowhere and chopped the snakes head off with the sward of Gryffindor. Voldemort reached for his heart his wand was splitting, as he let go of it I steered into his dark grey eyes then caught the wand.
Dark white skin flaked off Voldemort into the distance, I had defeated him. I felt safer now that he was dead just remembering he was going to kill me was a bad idea. I ran to my friends Ron, Hemoine and Neville thank God they were ok and thank God Voldemort was dead.
As the wind blew in my face I was hoping my friends would be ok battling a venomous snake, I saw them screaming in terror. Suddenly Neville came out of nowhere and chopped the snakes head off with the sward of Gryffindor. Voldemort reached for his heart his wand was splitting, as he let go of it I steered into his dark grey eyes then caught the wand.
Dark white skin flaked off Voldemort into the distance, I had defeated him. I felt safer now that he was dead just remembering he was going to kill me was a bad idea. I ran to my friends Ron, Hemoine and Neville thank God they were ok and thank God Voldemort was dead.
Tuesday, 12 August 2014
Lion King
After the battle smoke and ashes ruled the air and trees were on fire it was a disaster. Out of the smoke Timon and Pumbaa walked, seeing if there were any survivors. Simba walked to Rafiki, "it's time" Rafiki whispered softly.
Simba walked up Pride Rock animals from the jungle gathered round to see the new lion king. Simba stood proud, his wife smiled faintly at him.
As the years passed Pride Rock grew and beautiful birds enjoyed the freedom in the forest. All the animals look up to Simba where his dad once stood he now stands.
Simba and his wife had a little girl. As Rafiki held her up on Pride Rock Simba thought about his dad and how proud he would had of been. Simba smiled and Rooaaaaaaared!
Simba walked up Pride Rock animals from the jungle gathered round to see the new lion king. Simba stood proud, his wife smiled faintly at him.
As the years passed Pride Rock grew and beautiful birds enjoyed the freedom in the forest. All the animals look up to Simba where his dad once stood he now stands.
Simba and his wife had a little girl. As Rafiki held her up on Pride Rock Simba thought about his dad and how proud he would had of been. Simba smiled and Rooaaaaaaared!
Wednesday, 30 July 2014
Earthquake!!!!!!!!!!!
I woke up in the middle of the night. Dark shadows caved over me as I walked into my mum and dads room. My brother was already sitting there patiently. There was dead silence but I broke that silence by saying ''What was that.''
My mum replied ''It was an earthquake.'' I want over to the light switch but tripped over my mums drawers. I got up and went to turn the lights on, my dad came back in with torches and candles ''The lights aren't working,'' I said.
''That's why I lit the candles and brought torches,'' said my dad. the next day we went and explored Rolleston. We could see people cleaning up the shops through the windows. Later that afternoon the power came back on, my brother and I watched T.V.
The day was so scary I felt exited though because I had never been I a earthquake. A week later we went into christchurch to see all the damage.The best thing was the Pop-Up Mall it was colourful happy place.
My mum replied ''It was an earthquake.'' I want over to the light switch but tripped over my mums drawers. I got up and went to turn the lights on, my dad came back in with torches and candles ''The lights aren't working,'' I said.
''That's why I lit the candles and brought torches,'' said my dad. the next day we went and explored Rolleston. We could see people cleaning up the shops through the windows. Later that afternoon the power came back on, my brother and I watched T.V.
The day was so scary I felt exited though because I had never been I a earthquake. A week later we went into christchurch to see all the damage.The best thing was the Pop-Up Mall it was colourful happy place.
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